Meeting, Emails, Draft

I forwarded a rough draft of the script of what I had done it onto my actor who gave me this response:

"It's got a sense of reality to it. Both brothers came across believable and the dialogue is close to a conversation brothers would have. {You don't have a brother, so good job capturing that} 

The younger brother comes across as the steady one in the siblings. {Acting older brother in a way} To get this strongly across on screen, you might need to tweak the older brother as more of a waster/drop out type. With the younger being the one with the education & reliable head on his shoulders. This won't be a problem, I think we can capture that."

This gave me huge encouragement considering I don't have any brothers. I didn't know how the dialogue would read but I am delighted he is happy with it.

Although the script isn't finished here is what is done so far:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B3NgYOPv5d2GbjdSbzY5M2xqbVE/view?usp=sharing